Week 4 – COMM11007

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Happiness and family are the essence of what is important for eleven-year-old Darcy Grossmann and his seventeen-year-old sister Ciara when asked “What things are most important to you?”

Darcy didn’t hesitate stating that family is the most important thing to him, “family is everything to me,” he said.

When asked to describe his important moments with his family, Darcy said, “I love walking on the beach with my family, I feel so safe and secure and happy when we are all together just having fun.”

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Ciara Grossmann, a psychology student at James Cook University described her most important thing as happiness, “doing things that make me happy keeps me going in life,” she said.

When asked to describe one of the happiest moment in her life, Ciara described her recent graduation experience, “the whole family were together, all of us in one place, and also because I had worked really hard and achieved something, a goal that was important,” she said.

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Family, experiences and goals were the top of the list when asked to describe their top three important moments in life.

Ciara said, “for me, being with people I care about, achieving my goals and dreams, and experiencing things that bring me joy are my top three.”

Nodding in agreement with Ciara’s ideas, Darcy talked about AFL as one of his important moments, “I love playing AFL, I love the adrenaline rush of the game and the strategy, it makes me feel amazing,” he said.

As the interviewer and Ciara and Darcy’s Dad, it was a wonderful to talk about the important things in life.  As a parent it is reminder that time with family, creating happy moments and experiences is what life is truly about.

In his TEDx talk, Robert Waldinger a psychiatrist and the director of a 75-year-old study on adult development, describes the importance of relationships, “The clearest message that we get from this 75-year study is this: Good relationships keep us happier and healthier. Period.” (Waldinger, 2015)

Filmed is November 2015, Waldinger further describes, “It turns out that people who are more socially connected to family, to friends, to community, are happier, they’re physically healthier, and they live longer than people who are less well connected.”

Ciara and Darcy Grossmann in depths of their answers have have hit on the core needs of all humans, the need for relationships and connection.

References:

Waldinger, Robert, 2015. TED – Robert Waldinger: What makes a good life? Lessons formt he longest study on happiness.. [Online]
Available at: https://www.ted.com/talks/robert_waldinger_what_makes_a_good_life_lessons_from_the_longest_study_on_happiness/transcript?language=en#t-364840
[Accessed 7 August 2016].

REFLECTION:

I researched how to formulate a quotations before I commenced writing the news report.  The examples provided in part B of the blog assignment were invaluable in my learning and greatly appreciated as a guide.

Whilst there is a lot of work and time going into the weekly blog, it is providing to best form of practical learning.

TWEETS:

A link to this blog was included in the following tweets, posted shortly after publishing.

TECHNICAL: Complete Quiz 4

Quiz 4 is complete – 100% achieved on the second attempt, after a shaky start and 60% achievement.  The first round I thought that I would rely upon my experience, which got me nowhere fast, so it was back to the English for Journalists text book to research and find the correct answers.

The quiz is the best way to instil the practical learnings from the text book theory.   Whilst there is a mountain of writing, the more I write the better I feel and perhaps the better I get.

8 thoughts on “Week 4 – COMM11007

  1. Hi Clint,

    I really like your blog. It is easy to read, flows well and I like how you included the TEDx link. The grammar and punctuation seems correct also. Well done!

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  2. Hi Clint

    It was lovely to read your story about what’s important to your children!

    I also liked that you’ve given a little more feedback on your quiz this week, perhaps you could note what your first score was and what needed more work to reach 100%.

    My only other feedback is the phrasing of ‘described her most important thing was happiness’ reads awkwardly. My suggestion would be to change this to ‘described her most important thing as happiness’.

    Another great blog to add to the list!

    I look forward to reviewing week 5.

    Jesse

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  3. Hello Clint,

    I wanted to give you some feedback about your Storify version of your interviews.
    Firstly, I’ll say that I did enjoy your article and the photos you shared. It was a lovely family story, and I also posted that same Tedx talk onto Facebook a few weeks ago.

    Now, to the constructive feedback part.
    Your 1st paragraph’s sentence is very long, but if you removed the “When” at the start and “the question” from the sentence it would still make sense without being so long. Also the question mark acts as a full stop so therefore the “there was no…” should start with a capital letter on “There”.
    2nd para- “and 17 years” should just be 17 year old, “bought” is the past tense of buy and you mean ‘brought’.
    3rd par- what obvious reason? Also “family is important” is used twice (tweet) so there is some unwanted redundancy there.
    4th para- “ponder the question deeper” may be change to “question more deeply” for ease of reading.
    5th para- you have a typo of ‘the the”
    7th para- another typo “exanding” rather than “expanding”.
    8th para- “Nodding in enthusiastic agreement, keen not to be outdone” could be a way to rewrite that sentence to get rid of the repeated “and” in it.
    10th para- “within the depths” could be easier for readers to follow, and “have have” is in the 2nd sentence. Also “have been identified” should be “has been” to keep the tense the same.
    12th para- “Filmed is Nov ’15” should possibly be “Filmed on”.

    I am hoping to be helpful to you Clint,
    so I do hope I am,
    kind regards,

    Catherine.

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